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October 30, 1996 (probable)·Caller's story·6 min·at 2:17:45 in the broadcast

Childhood sounds and a cold presence in a Pomona house; a white figure in Ontario

An unnamed caller to Ghost to Ghost 1996 describes strange events in two childhood homes. In a house in Pomona, California, from about age five or six, they heard sounds after their mother left for a graveyard shift. They were repeatedly woken by an extremely cold presence over their bed, and they saw the family dogs escape weekly. In a later house in Ontario, California, around fourth grade, they saw a short, powdery-white glowing man in a navy peacoat walk up the hallway into their room, touch them, and seem to read their thoughts. The caller describes the figure’s face as blank and says the experience was impossible to describe. The host closes the segment with general remarks that children and animals sense such presences before adults do.

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Start and end pointsNot yet checked · confidence 0.75
How it was toldFirsthand · Live call
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0:00 · The caller says the events began when they were about five or six and continued for a few years, in a house in Pomona, California.0:10 · The caller shared a large room with their brother at the end of a hallway. Their mother worked a graveyard shift and left the house late at night.1:09 · After their mother left, the caller heard the coffee cup clank down on the counter again, though she had already gone.1:32 · Another night the caller heard the cup and saw a light turn on. The caller got up, went to the kitchen, and found nobody there.1:45 · The incidents increased. The caller told their parents and other adults, who said the caller was dreaming and did not believe them.2:14 · The family’s two dogs got out of the back room about once a week and ran up the hallway onto the beds. The caller says the caller and their brother never let the dogs out but were blamed.2:48 · The caller repeatedly woke suddenly at night to an extremely cold presence hovering over their bed. The sensation moved from their feet up into their chest and then left.3:24 · The caller would run to their grandmother’s room and hide in her bed.3:42 · Before the family moved, the caller told the presence never to bother them again.3:48 · The family moved to a house in Ontario, California, when the caller was about in the fourth grade.3:51 · The caller saw a very short man, glowing powdery white, in a navy peacoat with his hands in his pockets, walk up the hallway into their room.4:17 · The caller hid under the covers and peeked out. The figure put a hand on them and seemed to be reading their mind and telling them their own thoughts.4:35 · The caller remembers the figure’s face as blank.
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The story as told

The caller says that when they were about five or six, they lived in a house in Pomona, California. They shared a large room with their brother at the end of a hallway, and their mother worked a graveyard shift at a factory and left late at night. The caller describes a fixed nightly sequence of sounds: their mother making coffee, stirring and setting the cup down, turning off the lights, locking the front door, and driving away. Then, the caller says, after she was gone, they heard the coffee cup clank down on the counter again. On another night, the caller says, they heard the cup and saw the light turn on. They got up, went to the kitchen, and found nobody there. The caller says the incidents increased and that they told their father, their mother, and other adults, who told them they were dreaming. The caller also says the family’s two dogs, kept in the back room with the washer and dryer, got out about once a week and ran up the hallway onto the beds. The caller and their brother were blamed, although the caller says they never let the dogs out. The caller now wonders whether that was connected. The caller says they would wake suddenly at night with an extremely cold presence hovering right over their bed. A sensation traveled from their feet up into their chest and then stopped. They would run to their grandmother’s room and hide in her bed. Before the family moved, the caller says, they told the presence never to bother them again. In the new house in Ontario, California, when the caller was about in fourth grade, the caller says they looked up the hallway and saw a very short, powdery-white glowing man in a navy peacoat, hands in pockets, head crouched, walk into their room. The caller says they hid under the covers and peeked out. The figure put a hand on them and seemed to read their mind and tell them their own thoughts. The figure’s face was blank. The host then remarks that children and animals sense such things before adults do.

Reported events, in order

  1. 0:00

    The caller says the events began when they were about five or six and continued for a few years, in a house in Pomona, California.

  2. 0:10

    The caller shared a large room with their brother at the end of a hallway. Their mother worked a graveyard shift and left the house late at night.

  3. 1:09

    After their mother left, the caller heard the coffee cup clank down on the counter again, though she had already gone.

  4. 1:32

    Another night the caller heard the cup and saw a light turn on. The caller got up, went to the kitchen, and found nobody there.

  5. 1:45

    The incidents increased. The caller told their parents and other adults, who said the caller was dreaming and did not believe them.

  6. 2:14

    The family’s two dogs got out of the back room about once a week and ran up the hallway onto the beds. The caller says the caller and their brother never let the dogs out but were blamed.

  7. 2:48

    The caller repeatedly woke suddenly at night to an extremely cold presence hovering over their bed. The sensation moved from their feet up into their chest and then left.

  8. 3:24

    The caller would run to their grandmother’s room and hide in her bed.

  9. 3:42

    Before the family moved, the caller told the presence never to bother them again.

  10. 3:48

    The family moved to a house in Ontario, California, when the caller was about in the fourth grade.

  11. 3:51

    The caller saw a very short man, glowing powdery white, in a navy peacoat with his hands in his pockets, walk up the hallway into their room.

  12. 4:17

    The caller hid under the covers and peeked out. The figure put a hand on them and seemed to be reading their mind and telling them their own thoughts.

  13. 4:35

    The caller remembers the figure’s face as blank.

Claims

Each claim is labeled as something the person telling the story noticed (observation), what they made of it (interpretation), something others told them (hearsay), or something the host said (host statement).

  • observation· 1:09

    After their mother had left for work and the house was dark, the caller heard the coffee cup clank down on the counter again.

  • observation· 1:32

    On another night the caller heard the cup go down and saw a light turn on after their mother had left.

  • observation· 1:43

    The caller went to the kitchen and found nobody there.

  • observation· 2:14

    About once a week, the family’s two dogs got out of the back room and ran up the hallway onto the children’s beds. The caller says they and their brother never let the dogs out.

  • observation· 2:48

    The caller repeatedly woke suddenly at night to an extremely cold presence hovering right over their bed.

  • observation· 3:08

    The sensation moved from their feet up into their chest area and then stopped. The caller says this happened often and felt draining.

  • observation· 3:51

    In the Ontario house the caller saw a very short man, powdery white and glowing, in a navy peacoat, walking up the hallway into their room.

  • observation· 4:17

    The figure put a hand on the caller.

  • observation· 4:24

    It seemed to the caller that the figure was reading their mind and telling them what they were thinking.

  • observation· 4:35

    The caller remembers the figure’s face as blank.

  • interpretation· 2:36

    The caller calls the Pomona events “spiritual in nature” without naming any being or dead person.

  • interpretation· 3:42

    Before the family moved, the caller spoke to the presence and told it never to bother them again.

  • interpretation· 2:33

    The caller now wonders whether the dogs’ repeated escapes were connected to the other events.

  • host statement· 4:50

    The host says that children and animals sense such presences before adults do.

Scores, with reasons

An AI model gave these scores using a fixed set of scoring rules (scoring-v1). They are editorial judgments and rough guides, not the odds that anything paranormal happened. How scoring works.

Believability
A rough guide to how credible the story is as told
58

A clear firsthand childhood story with a concrete sequence and sensory detail. But it is recalled decades later with admitted memory gaps, has no details that can be checked beyond city names, and part of it fits an ordinary explanation (sleep-related sensations on waking).

Evidence for and against
For
  • Firsthand, direct account of events the caller says they experienced themself.
  • Sequence and sensory detail: the nightly sounds of their mother making coffee and leaving, then the cup clanking again.
  • Two named places (Pomona and Ontario, California) and a grade level for the second episode.
  • A descriptive, calm report of the hallway figure: [quote withheld]
  • Some calibration: [quote withheld] and [quote withheld]
Against
  • Recalled from about age five or six and about fourth grade, with the caller admitting their memory is incomplete: [quote withheld]
  • No dates and no names beyond two cities, so little can be checked beyond the city names.
  • A sleep-related state on waking fits the recurring cold presence and the feet-to-chest sensation reasonably well.
  • The host cut the story short for time, and the caller skipped material.
Uncertain or missing
  • The labels showing who is speaking switch between the host and the caller, sometimes within one sentence, so who said some lines is unreliable.
  • The story is compressed and cut short for time. Detail the caller said they would skip is unavailable.
  • The automatic transcript is low in confidence at the feet-to-chest description.
Passages cited
  • 0:00
  • 0:10
  • 1:09
  • 3:51

What the model inferred (not said on air): Component scoring: source proximity 17 (firsthand but partial, childhood recall); specificity 12; internal consistency 15 (coherent sequence and answers to the host’s prompts); alternative explanations 6 (an ordinary waking-state explanation fits part of the story); calibration 8 (the caller admits they cannot explain it, but also says [quote withheld]). The total is 58. No cap applies: it is not secondhand, not presented as a joke or fiction, and not a fragment.

Evidence strength
Support in the story that others could check
8

The story rests entirely on the caller’s own word, with a few place details that were never checked and no claimed physical evidence or on-air second witness.

Evidence for and against
For
  • Details that could be checked are given only at the level of city names, “Pomona, California” and “Ontario, California,” and a school grade.
  • The caller says they told adults at the time, who disbelieved them. The caller claims a report to others, but none of them is on air.
Against
  • No photograph, recording, document, or physical trace is claimed or examined.
  • No second witness speaks on air. The host’s remarks are general commentary, not backing from someone else.
  • The brother, the grandmother, and the adults mentioned are not said to have seen or heard anything themselves.
Uncertain or missing
  • No outside check was done, and none is available in the request.
  • It is not stated whether any family member could back them up.
Passages cited
  • 0:05
  • 3:48
  • 1:45

What the model inferred (not said on air): The 0–10 band fits: the caller’s word alone. A small bump to 8 reflects the named towns and grade level, which could at least nominally be located but were not checked.

Creepiness
How unsettling the story is, for entertainment
65

The story is a child’s night-time bedroom intrusion by a cold presence, a draining sensation, and a blank-faced figure that touches the caller and seems to read their thoughts. It escalates across two homes and is left unresolved.

Evidence for and against
For
  • Intrusion into a child’s bedroom: an extremely cold presence hovering directly over the bed at night.
  • A sensation moving from feet to chest, described as draining energy.
  • Physical contact by the hallway figure: [quote withheld]
  • A blank-faced figure in the room and an apparent mind-reading experience.
  • It ends without explanation or resolution.
Against
  • The Pomona phase is partly ordinary and low-key (coffee cup sounds, dogs escaping).
  • No injury, no stated threat, and no harm reported to anyone.
  • The caller tells it in a matter-of-fact way, not as escalating horror.
Uncertain or missing
  • The caller’s own description of their feelings is brief and partly held back ([quote withheld]).
  • Some lines are cut off mid-sentence in the transcript.
Passages cited
  • 2:48
  • 4:17
  • 4:35

What the model inferred (not said on air): Placed around 65: sustained night-time bedroom dread and physical contact by an unexplained figure, with no resolution, but without an explicit threat, harm, or graphic horror.

Originality
How different it is from familiar recurring details
57

A familiar haunted-childhood setup with distinctive detail: the peacoat-clad glowing figure with a blank face and the apparent mind-reading. That lifts it above stock elements only.

Evidence for and against
For
  • A distinctive combination in the Ontario episode: a short, powdery-white glowing man in a navy peacoat with hands in pockets and head crouched, who touches the caller and seems to read their thoughts.
  • The Pomona detail of the exact household sound sequence (coffee, cup down, lights off, door, car) recurring after the mother had already left.
  • The caller’s own link between the weekly dog escapes and the other events.
Against
  • The core setup is familiar: a child in a haunted house, a night-time bedroom presence, escalating activity, a family that disbelieves, and a move.
  • The recurring motifs are common in this archive (cold presence, hallway figure, faceless figure, moving out).
Uncertain or missing
  • Novelty compared with the rest of the archive is not available at the time of analysis. The score is provisional.
  • Which motifs apply depends on partly garbled transcript lines.
Passages cited
  • 4:08
  • 4:24
  • 1:09

What the model inferred (not said on air): My provisional originality score is 55: a familiar setup (child witness, night-time bedroom presence, escalation, moving house) with one or two truly distinctive details. I did not compare it with the rest of the archive. With a small pilot archive, the published value stays close to my score and is labeled provisional.

Scoring confidence 0.60 · analysis confidence 0.66 · checked against outside sources: no · evidence available: The caller’s firsthand childhood story, recalled decades later; The caller says they reported the events to adults at the time, who disbelieved them (no on-air confirmation from those adults); No photograph, recording, document, or mark claimed or examined; No second witness speaks on air. The originality score blends the model's score (55) with how rare the story's details are across the archive. This method is still provisional.

Ordinary explanations to consider

These are possibilities only. None is a finding about what happened.

  • A sleep-related state on waking, such as imagery while falling asleep or waking up, or sleep paralysis with bodily sensations, could account for the cold presence and the feet-to-chest sensation. The caller says this happened repeatedly on waking. · The caller reports waking abruptly at night, followed by a cold presence over the bed and a sensation moving from the feet to the chest that then stops.
  • Ordinary household sources, such as another family member, a pet, a timer or switch, or house noise, could produce the repeated sounds and the light after their mother left. The caller only says the kitchen was empty when they arrived. · The cup clank and the light going on after the mother left, with nobody found in the kitchen when the caller checked.
  • The dogs could simply have been getting out on their own, through a door or gate that was not properly secured or by pushing their way out, apart from the other reported events. · The dogs were kept in the back room with the washing machine and dryer and got out roughly weekly. The caller and their brother denied letting them out.

What stands out

In the Ontario episode, the figure is unusually specific: a short, powdery-white glowing man in a navy peacoat, with hands in his pockets and a blank face. The caller also says it seemed to read their thoughts while touching them. The caller volunteers that they now wonder whether the family dogs’ weekly escapes from the laundry room were connected to the other events.

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